This next bit of last minute fiming has been used from the The Omen with the use of a happy family which will also be shown in the trailer as a title. The use of the narrative which is needed in order to improve our trailer is vital because at the minute their is no flow and sense to it. I think this last minute filming will definitely mean that it will become more clear to the audience..
This is the Voiceover script
Key thing to make sure is you get that range of shots and angles. Remember - you are trying to establish the "ordinary world"; you don't need to show every moment (you could, for example, fade to black between particular moments). I would suggest including a montage of family moments before moving into the narrrative you describe (which build into the drama). At the end, I would make a big deal of the boy finding the father's body, then perhaps seeing blood on his hands, then turning and seeing the mother's body. You might also want some sort of insert hinting at the "evil". You might want to take a look at "Deathseekers" (http://vimeo.com/30685650), produced by some of my previous students, for an idea?
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